Alexander, I'll go one further than Kevin and offer the following tactless praise: I like the music a lot, and I think it contributes more to the film than the images themselves. That is, when I watched the film with no sound, the images seemed incoherent... in particular, between the rapid-fire editing and the amateur acting, they seemed downright perfunctory, never developing any expressive depth.
Fortunately for the filmmaker, your music establishes both a sense of overall continuity (arguably normal practice for this sort of thing), and more importantly, an emotional connection. It transforms what might have come across as slapstick into something more affecting.
In fact, when I hear the music without the images, I don't miss the latter a bit.
Gordon, it's not your computer; I hear the same thing, in the same spots.